Saturday, February 15, 2014

Uncle Henry Comments

Rating: 5.0

Uncle Henry, in a corner,
sleeping by the fireplace.
Dreaming of his long gone childhood
firm of form and fair of face.
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Thomas Vaughan Jones
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Patricia Grantham 22 February 2014

Uncle Henry in his last throes of life. Reminiscing about the good old days. At least he had something to remember, especially the golden tresses. Very nice and lilting write.

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Poetheart Morgan 20 February 2014

What can i write....or say...i think just feelings here....beauty, complicity, love, lost, all so sweet as music. 10 plus

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Thomas Vaughan Jones 17 February 2014

I get quite emotional thinking of those golden tresses. Those were the days :)

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Joseph Anderson 17 February 2014

Tom- you are right. Love, loss, death and sadness make for a more emotional, impactful and memorable write. This is a moving and stirring write -10

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Anthony Burkett 16 February 2014

So very beautifully written... I tip my hat to you on this one, Sir!

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Valerie Dohren 15 February 2014

Simply beautiful Thomas - celebration of a life well lived. Good old Henry, your Dad, bless him.

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