Thursday, September 27, 2012

Uncle Dearest Comments

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My Guiding Light
Fatherly
Uncle Dearest
My guiding light
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Harindhar Reddy 27 September 2012

Uncle dearest is amazing poem which reflects the bond of 2 souls. Amazing ink! Expected something got something else. Hope my STAR ends my sordid saga of rat race. Thanks for calling me Peter-pan, it gives me hope till Friday evening 6 PM. Hope some u had some good dreams...... Your shadow didn't eat and sleep, heartache and head spinning. With fusion and confusion....... oh Kashimiri dove!

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Allemagne Roßmann 27 September 2012

Protecting Watching my back Mindful of past experience An uncle, advisor and friend In happiness and sorrow A bond stronger Acid tongues can't melt away Talented poet and author The central idea of the poem rotates and retorts perhaps here...some uncles are so.They love to control niece to be father.May be for fatherly affection or its overdose when uncle looks like a carbuncle.I dunno how he became bad wolf if he is not the one-may be because he lost the aunt or perhaps aunties today are so smart that they are becoming parallel to wife a harlot.A great tribute nevertheless to ur uncle

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 27 September 2012

Nice words. your words have golden wings and they pass the air to a fragrant brilliant light Uncle dearest sounds amazing how. SO lovely and good. well penning and well done. Ellias_

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Saadat Tahir 27 September 2012

lovely.... :) a suitable ode to a personage of substance... cheers ***

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