Unchanged Comments

'Gone with the wind' is a topic from your Great South. The South is changed, everything changes. Only human heart will never change. I passed you as poet with full marks. However maybe I've received more than I've done.

very nice representation of common teenage depression.

Hi Amanda, When we reach a certain point in life, we do tend to ask ourselves..where we're heading...we reflect back on our life's..past mistakes...forgotten or lost loves and wishes..but in the end..its us...who make the change.....keep your dreams for they feed the soul....follow your heart...you'll reach your goal......and in the end when you've got a smile on your face........you made it home. Best wishes to you Amanda, you're an excellent writer...'10' Jon

This is very good it offers a sense of angst filled exceptance Thank you Nik