The broken strings in my violin
Had only played intone within
Stultifying melancholy tune
That even bored my self within
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illusion is the basis of perceptive reality.....thats what i learnt from this poem. wonderfully composed.....i loved it. thank you.
a substantial verses upon an evolution of life, a logic beyond imagination and focus to readers interpretation ot develop a conclusion.....10
the unending dichotomy of illusion and reality as we percieve it...i lked the way you began the poem...and the tempo has been sustained consistently...
very intelligent work Sandhya...you take up a difficult theme and handle it wise, effortlessly...you have a very good thinking mind...profound piece...10