Thursday, March 24, 2016

Uncertainties Comments

Rating: 5.0

A family scattered with the rising sun,
to return at dusk,
in the shelter zone of love...
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Jaishree Nair
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Kishore Kumar Das 07 April 2016

the next moment is unpredictable...the gist of your poem nicely captured by you..

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Ratnakar Mandlik 24 March 2016

Human has really become helpless due to uncertainties and treats to life posed by a number of reasons to people in the home who had gone out for work etc and the home maker is left behind to worry about their safety till they return home. A thought provoking touching poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 March 2016

Concern! With the ways of life. Thanks for sharing.

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