Friday, May 17, 2013

Uncertain -A Certain Comments

Rating: 4.9

O my pearly fate! Why ye keepeth the dew?
Through you I see the beautiful world
How can I see? It is totally blurred
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Akhtar Jawad 02 October 2014

Spark of sun alone will kill you all My fate! You must remove the curtain, Wanted to make uncertain –a certain It's amazing Aftab.

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Sallam Yassin 18 May 2013

the true is beyond the curtain only heart with faith truly can see you blessed bro.. and your word too/ thanks

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Neela Nath Das 17 May 2013

Wonderful poem on your suffering soul's experience.Never give up.Great!

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R.j. Wynn 17 May 2013

My pleasure to comment on such work that it inspires me so.

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Wahab Abdul 17 May 2013

this is a clean poetry..with lovely diction... love it... and giving you..10

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