Uncertain Comments

Life itself is uncertain. It snatches our innocence and throw us in the sea of uncertainty. Beautifully described poem. Compliments.

The first two lines are captivating! Wonderful use of simile..a beautiful poem! (10)

I was like a paper boat Loaded with innocence Started the voyage on The sea of time…. To a destination unknown- - - - - Life is so uncertain- - Destination unknown- - A beautiful poem, thanks for sharing.

Life on Earth is just like a paper boat. This floats and this moves on. There is no certainty in this life. An amazing perceptional poem is brilliantly penned....10