Uncertain Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Uncertain

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Who can, for us

fetch a Sun new

to rise in the East


with rays golden

through a window

that'd awaken our babies

with eyes shut, yet

dreams unhurt?



Who can render

in these eyes dry,

like the rainless sand-


a couple of nights

with fearless sleep

for slum dwellers

without an inch of land?

Tuesday, December 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: futile,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 21 December 2017

Very nice poem. Poetic queries and I enjoyed the baby part. Kudos. Soo nice to read from u again. Pls do review comment my latest poem too, titled, saints and sinners/ordinary folks

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Ashika Murali Acharya 19 December 2017

So many unanswered question that keeps pondering over at times.Nice theme.

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Ravi Kopra 19 December 2017

Sun will now not rise again in the East it will remain sunk for ever under the weight of the greedy bastards who have plundered the earth and people...

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Rini Shibu 19 December 2017

Few things in life are uncertain and never can be answered.. Well penned

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 December 2017

Subhas, such a profound poem👍👍👍

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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