Tuesday, September 8, 2009

Unbuttoned Comments

Rating: 4.8

just when summers jostles with you
and your garment acts up acts on its own
buttons of your shirt come undone
and quite aligned with contours of moment
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Rachel Butler 20 September 2009

my mind goes awry and unleash onto that minuscule excuse the brute of imagination Rachel Ann Butler

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Linda Ori 09 September 2009

Amazing where the imagination can take you with just a few misplaced buttons! This is a light and refreshing read, Rehan. It presented just a little peek beneath the 'sails of discourse'. When the mind strays, it's sometimes difficult to stay the course. Very nicely done! Linda ; -)

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