Tuesday, July 6, 2021

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Rating: 5.0

Lifespan veils birth, growth, and fade,
live in realm of light and shade.
Who are you? Who am I? mom!
Are we the far-off orb charm?
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Lasaad Tayeb
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Solomon Terlumun Tule 22 July 2021

Wonderfully and awesomely written poem, with nice looking picture

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 July 2021

A poem if great insight. Congratulations for having this poem as Poem Of The Day.

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Dear Lasaad, the picture added too is very beautiful.

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Heartiest Congratulations! Superb poem that deserves top stars

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Wonderful to see your poem honoured as the poem of the day!

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Varsha M 20 July 2021

Indeed defining them is very difficult. We are we the unique one. Beautiful. Congratulations POD.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 July 2021

A perceptive write.... many congratulations! !

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 July 2021

5 Stars full for this powerfully worded poem. Most deserving Member Poem Of The Day. Hoorray! Love to read this MPOTD

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Chinedu Dike 20 July 2021

An insightful bit of verse, well conceived and wonderfully penned with conviction...

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Indira Renganathan 15 July 2021

'We are earth, water, and sky. Lifespan veils birth, growth, and fade.'......true lovely lines...inspiring poem 5*****

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M Asim Nehal 07 July 2021

A complete life story in Haiku, terse. Lasaad.5**

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 06 July 2021

ditto Bravo!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 July 2021

A powerful and thought provoking poem. Beautifully crafted. Liked the recurring lines in the opening and closure lines

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