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the rungs on deep of night by art of love dew never uncovers as it redeems before light, wonderful write, most passionate yet graceful by ingenuity, like autumn breeze smooching the stance of nature, and emotive too,10+++, thanks for sharing

Great. you have just threaded the end of the point of an started end....like a wind...directed to wind in the wintertime of wisdom....the lasting cool burn to breeze the humid air of the pole....beautiful dear lady...God bless... a 10 +++++

Thank you Grace - This is a lovely poem from a lovely Lady. It is all a poem should be - it has structure - plenty of rhthym and a touch of rhyme to ameliorate the flow. The sentiments are very empathetic and the dedication very moving. Poetry is verbalised emotion - expressing our inner musings in image - metaphor - similie and poetic language to craft something beautiful. You have done this perfectly Grace and produced poetic elegance. V 1 Dark clouds V 2 Tear soaked pillows V 3 Kind touches - words and dancing V 4 Loving hearts V 5 gentle sway - songs and sweet roses V 6 Laughter joy of greeting V 7 Rainbows - birds and tears of joy V 8 This poem is so so progressive Grace each verse moves us nearer the consumation of love 'The transmission of hate and love - is a loving sign of independence - a smile that glitters on our lips - is the mirth that grows in our spirit'. This is so so beautiful Grace thank you for sharing the harmony of your beautiful Spirit. Love you in Poetry - JOHN X

Very poetic excellent write great job done here

Truly for a knight, lady.