Monday, April 21, 2008

Unbroken Chains Comments

Rating: 4.5

Let my eyes lay upon your face,
May your lips speak words across my dreams.
To only be lost in time and delicate space,
For still your warmth is drifting it seems.
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william luo
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Alancia Lebogang Mogorosi 09 September 2008

Beautiful poem............................well done. took my breath away

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Tyease Collins 03 May 2008

Your poems are so soft and gentle and just so romantic. It's perfect. Tyease

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