Tuesday, October 17, 2017

Unbridled Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why does the ground I stand
Gives way
Whenever I see you
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Nabakishore Dash 26 April 2022

awesome poetic skill.

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Anjandev Roy 06 February 2020

Superb piece. Thank u, dear poetess. anjandev roy.

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Indira Renganathan 03 September 2019

A superb portrayal of love.....lovely poem Rose

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Valsa George 17 April 2019

This is absolutely what one feels when he/she is with the person for whom he/she develops a crush for the first time. As the love grows deeper, there will be more intimacy and many subjects to talk over! The initial stage of attraction is such that one forgets one's real self and is being totally controlled by some exciting emotion. You have beautifully described the initial 'fever' of being in love!

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 April 2019

Why do I feel full And full of joy By mere looking at you.. controlled by an unknown. passion expressed so well. tony

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Srijita Mondal 28 February 2019

Very nice poem..Love is Everything..it makes us weak yet it is the greatest strength on earth..it brings sorrow but nothing is more joyous than Love

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 December 2018

Why do i go weak? ! Facing the muse of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 November 2018

Why do I feel full And full of joy By mere looking at you controlled by the Unknown. love expressed in a very fantastic way. a fine poem thank u dear poetess. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 October 2018

A well penned poem. So touching and moving. Nice penmanship. Love and romantic well expressed. My pleasure reading it time and again.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 August 2018

With this feeling I am reduced To a mere machine......lovely expression dear Rose!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 August 2018

Let me out Of this feeling Unbridled and unknown It is a bottomless pit That sweeps me down To the state of oblivion........ touching expression with nice theme. A beautiful poem so nicely executed and amazingly shared.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 August 2018

It is a bottomless pit That sweeps me down To the state of oblivion.....Each stanza of this marvelous piece of poetry is commendable! My great pleasure revisiting it!

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Akhtar Jawad 26 April 2018

With this feeling I am reduced To a mere machine Controlled by an unknown We all are self thinking robots in the hands of nature. The poem is thought provoking.

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Robert Murray Smith 21 April 2018

This poem has great depth and feeling.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 29 March 2018

Yes Rose, that's love, you have beautifully designed a running commentary of how one feels in practice and what one undergoes while those moments of ecstasy pass through. Great poem. So romantic. 10++++++++++++++++ Subhas

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Subhas, thank you for this amazing comment. I feel honored.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 March 2018

I want to fly Explore the realm of knowledge And set dominion Over my existence.....beautiful poetic expression! Loved revisiting it!

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I always treasure your comments, Dr. Dillip and revisiting my works is much appreciated.

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Akhtar Jawad 09 March 2018

Feelings in love so nicely described, yes we become a slave in love. A beautiful poem.

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Thank you, Akhtar for your wonderful comment.

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Muzahidul Reza 04 February 2018

Love is well penned here from multi situations, thanks for sharing the poem with us

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 February 2018

An amazing comment, Muzahidul. Thank.you for the visit and time.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 February 2018

'Unbridled' is a lovely poem Rose........My favorite lines: I want to fly/Explore the realm of knowledge/And set dominion/Over my existence. Wonderful piece of poetry!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 February 2018

Thank you Dr.Dillip for this amazing comment.I will always treasure it.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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