Why does the ground I stand
Gives way
Whenever I see you
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This is absolutely what one feels when he/she is with the person for whom he/she develops a crush for the first time. As the love grows deeper, there will be more intimacy and many subjects to talk over! The initial stage of attraction is such that one forgets one's real self and is being totally controlled by some exciting emotion. You have beautifully described the initial 'fever' of being in love!
Why do I feel full And full of joy By mere looking at you.. controlled by an unknown. passion expressed so well. tony
Very nice poem..Love is Everything..it makes us weak yet it is the greatest strength on earth..it brings sorrow but nothing is more joyous than Love
Why do i go weak? ! Facing the muse of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Why do I feel full And full of joy By mere looking at you controlled by the Unknown. love expressed in a very fantastic way. a fine poem thank u dear poetess. tony
A well penned poem. So touching and moving. Nice penmanship. Love and romantic well expressed. My pleasure reading it time and again.
With this feeling I am reduced To a mere machine......lovely expression dear Rose!
Let me out Of this feeling Unbridled and unknown It is a bottomless pit That sweeps me down To the state of oblivion........ touching expression with nice theme. A beautiful poem so nicely executed and amazingly shared.10
It is a bottomless pit That sweeps me down To the state of oblivion.....Each stanza of this marvelous piece of poetry is commendable! My great pleasure revisiting it!
With this feeling I am reduced To a mere machine Controlled by an unknown We all are self thinking robots in the hands of nature. The poem is thought provoking.
Yes Rose, that's love, you have beautifully designed a running commentary of how one feels in practice and what one undergoes while those moments of ecstasy pass through. Great poem. So romantic. 10++++++++++++++++ Subhas
Subhas, thank you for this amazing comment. I feel honored.
I want to fly Explore the realm of knowledge And set dominion Over my existence.....beautiful poetic expression! Loved revisiting it!
I always treasure your comments, Dr. Dillip and revisiting my works is much appreciated.
Feelings in love so nicely described, yes we become a slave in love. A beautiful poem.
Love is well penned here from multi situations, thanks for sharing the poem with us
An amazing comment, Muzahidul. Thank.you for the visit and time.
'Unbridled' is a lovely poem Rose........My favorite lines: I want to fly/Explore the realm of knowledge/And set dominion/Over my existence. Wonderful piece of poetry!
Thank you Dr.Dillip for this amazing comment.I will always treasure it.
awesome poetic skill.