Monday, April 23, 2018

Unbreakable Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a reverse baptism
she will wash out of you
by degrees, like a moon straining to rise
or an eclipse slowly gaining on the sun.
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Patti Masterman
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Smoky Hoss 03 May 2018

Stunning. The span of living, like the path tread by great lovers, doomed to one day part. What a beautiful, powerful, so well written poem. I love this one. A favorite indeed. Your work still, always impresses.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 April 2018

Dear Patti, such an interesting poem.....10+++++

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