Friday, September 13, 2013

Unborn Fruits.....Child! Comments

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Down into the soil,
sowed some seeds
watered them every day
Waited each day
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 June 2018

And waited for the fruits to come. But I have to cut the tree myself. My same hand did it. Along with the tree New unborn fruits too died away Leaving me dead too! .....so touching with great theme. It is a beautiful philosophical write astutely shared.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 August 2016

Life and loss! With the ways of Creation; however, hope lies ahead. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Gajanan Mishra 13 September 2013

happiness knew no words with new creation, wonderful world. thanks. Really you are a great poet. new creation is there when there is a destruction. Destruction for new creation, destruction is the green signal for new creation.

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Geetha Jayakumar

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