Wednesday, October 14, 2020

Unblemish Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Her body is a melting pot
On the silken sheet
with pillow beneath
trying hard to hold spinning head
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M. Asim Nehal
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Barbara Bush 16 October 2020

Lovely sensual poem with twisted and controlled ending.

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Ricky Manhatten 16 October 2020

Super poem, till the very end you kept guessing.10

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Anjandev Roy 16 October 2020

This is justly brilliant....thank u, dear poet.....anjandev roy.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 October 2020

Mutual flame ignites the path of love. The perception can talk more about another perception of love. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned..5 stars..

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Suresh Kumar Ek 15 October 2020

melting pot on a silken sheet with infinite potential.

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Shreya Hacks 14 October 2020

Words were magical.... smell of love in the air and everywhere hairs like desert of vast eternity with dunes of desires despair was meager to obliterate

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Zoyza Da Vinka 14 October 2020

Climax turned to anticlimax. Nice way to end with 360 degree twist

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Michael Jack 14 October 2020

A very sensual poem nicely written till the very end and the twist and the turn at the and make this poem very interesting.Full stars

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Barbara Bush 14 October 2020

Love is unblemish. We are to be blamed for making it lustful.

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Zuzu Mutairi 14 October 2020

Bodies heat and minds calmness a deadly combination I see a philosophical undertone in this poem.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 14 October 2020

Nice and raunchy. Ignite ignite ignite whole nite hold on tite.

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S H 14 October 2020

No blame on love ultimately it is the winner we are the loser because we do not differentiate between love and

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Darren Jkoeryo 14 October 2020

DJ like the tone and the flow of the poem In The End DJ got a surprise that nothing happened only with a sweet description it and it...5

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Darren Jkoeryo 14 October 2020

DJ like the tone and the flow of the poem In The End DJ got a surprise that nothing happened only with a sweet description it and it

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Varsha M 14 October 2020

Beautiful emotional pour. Good unblemished love. Thank-you sir.

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Deepak S S 14 October 2020

A sacred fire none can tourch or concur.

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Poetic Sky 14 October 2020

Love is pure and beyond sensual things.

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