Friday, December 31, 2004

Unbelievable Comments

Rating: 2.1

Racing tsunamis
Bring an old type of death,
Killing with drowning,
And smashing out breaths.
...
Read full text

Sandra Osborne
COMMENTS
Herbert Nehrlich1 31 December 2004

Like the double use of unbelievably...because it really still is, and the reference to the help and its nature is very good observation, calling a spade a spade. An excellent poem, timely, needed. Thanks, Sandra H

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success