Wednesday, March 3, 2010

Unbearable Monster Comments

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Look, look at me
Look at what you've done.
The rage I feel inside my heart
Is all because of you.
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Hannah Diane Williams
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It is a very hard thing to overcome. I know how you feel, I think, at least kinda, cuz I now how what it's like to have someone you really love hurt you bad. This flowed nicely. Full of heart. Nice job.

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