Sunday, February 7, 2016

Unbearable Comments

Rating: 4.5

I married him
Not to know
I was marrying her too
She interfered
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Lyn Paul
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Frank Davis, Sr. 25 August 2018

Marriage is difficult enough without without the disruption of outside influences- -unnecessary added pressures. Sad and meaningful offering!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 November 2017

You have penned touchingly how life has unbearable pain after marriage. Often love, affection, empathy are lost. Some domineer. I quote... They took so much From me Still Domineering Without me Still interfering In what I created Ruling everyone's lives Beautifully crafted. Thanks for sharing.

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Annette Aitken 25 August 2016

This was deffo my marriage, him the mother then me, its ok got out years ago......great write Annette

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 March 2016

Gosh I thought westerners are totally free from in law interference n problems. This poem surprises me. But I still tink yor mom inlaws have far less say n power than Indian mom inlaws. But things are changing now n the last few years has seen dominant daughter in laws among indians too. So yor poem showed the afterall similar human conditions very nicely in a wry way. Long may u write out yor heart pal.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 February 2016

I understand your Situation! Marriage is not always smooth. It has its own problems as well. Do take things very easy; for peace than hatred. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kelly Kurt 07 February 2016

Unfortunately marriage includes everyone in the partner's past

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