Monday, March 24, 2014

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My muscled up healthy smile
approaches you, arms outstretched
for a warm embrace
But in return your smile stretches
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Itai Oscar
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Pradip Chattopadhyay 24 March 2014

the last stanza is deep and haunting.

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Smile :) 24 March 2014

soo sweet poem, i loove it keep it up

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