Tuesday, July 14, 2015

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The roses you sent
Sit wilting in the window sill.
It's as if they are waiting
For you to come and claim them
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Suzanne Hayasaki
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Rajnish Manga 05 March 2017

Great poem which is my favourite now. It gives a very delicate treatment to a relationship which, though exquisite and valuable, could not blossom as it should have been. The pain come alive. ....I allow some flowers / To die a slow, lingering death, As one by one red petals fall off....

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Suzanne Hayasaki

Suzanne Hayasaki

Menomonee Falls, WI, USA
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