line 3: why the period? and after some other lines as well?
They only thing, .. i think you 'want' The, not They.
i would read it more easily and appreciate the poem more if you cleaned it up a bit.
bri :)
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
line 3: why the period? and after some other lines as well? They only thing, .. i think you 'want' The, not They. i would read it more easily and appreciate the poem more if you cleaned it up a bit. bri :)