Wednesday, August 23, 2006

Unappealing Blank Papers Comments

Rating: 5.0

All the blank pages
Normally would invite
A pen to leave a mark
Wooing the writer to
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Asma Bahrainwala 06 September 2006

hey preets, nice write. 'Unappealing Blank Papers'-is quite an appealing poem. :) Beautifully rendered! Last two lines r indeed very striking.

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Krishna Dasani 30 August 2006

life's dark when life's like 'kora kaagaz'.. amazing write up.. a new subject matter for me.. it was fun reading it.. awesome! ! keep it up.. smiles, krishna

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Rajaram Ramachandran 28 August 2006

Preeti can create something out of nothing-I find from this poem. Your imagination is very much on the high side.

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Nalini Hebbar 23 August 2006

kora kagaz...kora na rahega...you have talent preets...i know you will fill up books...love...nalini

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Sandra Fowler 23 August 2006

Blank papers may be unappealing, but your poem is quite the opposite. You write with wisdom and great charm. Regards, Sandra

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Catastrophe King 23 August 2006

AMEN! ! We all here are sure you will not mess your life - you are very matured surely. BTW... this is a beautiful piece.

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Aashish Ameya 23 August 2006

all the best for a beautiful life

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