Sunday, May 10, 2009

Unanswered Whys In My Mind Comments

Rating: 5.0

Feeling like being carried away in wind
Grasping a dandelion clock instead of wing

Looking down at the people when drift
...
Read full text

shirin sheikhi
COMMENTS
Anil Kumar Panda 27 July 2011

wonderful ink.matured thoughts put nicely on paper.liked it.

0 0 Reply
Dr Antony Theodore 04 May 2010

Feeling like being carried away in wind Looking down at the people when drift Drowning in their own lives dreams Living in the world but like to be discrete i liked these lines dear shriin, i too like to be descrete and pen my poems. thank u for sharing this poem. i love ur poems..

0 0 Reply
Saadat Tahir 10 May 2009

hi shirin very very nice so tender...and yes the agony of it we all feel great lines cheers

0 0 Reply

powerful thoughts you put to ink in this piece.

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success