Unacceptable Fate Comments
I am unable to control
And respond to the natural call
It is fire inside against divisive forces
That is out to destroy the defense
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Strong views on liberty and freedom Frank Duffey10 minutes ago takes a look at the system as a whole and has strong views about what is going on there Comment +1
Lovely Michelle Cappel13 minutes ago Lovely rich wording and imagery along with good flow and rhyme. some wording sounded a little awkward to me, but very excellent none the less. Comment +1
Re: Unacceptable fate (Score: 1) by LoveLifeLen on Monday, April 21,2014 (20: 47: 47) You have expressed yourself well. Very nice! Smile
Scott Ransopher likes this. Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 5 hrs · Unlike · 1
Very thought provoking..............full of melody! ..............liked it
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good one Ouranos Frey7 minutes ago well written, and understandable please check my poem *TRUE DARKNESS NEVER DIES* Comment +1
nice reign everlasting9 minutes ago I like your poems Comment +1
Nice idea Caleb Turner7 minutes ago Someone sees what's going on
I am unable to control And respond to the natural call
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Agreed Yousuf Faroqi8 minutes ago I agree with you Mr.Mehta, we take what we have for granted. I think because we are so busy with our lives, we neglect the wrong that happens in our society. And yes, if this continues then it will be an unacceptable fate. Am I thinking alongside you? Or have I the wrong idea of the poem? Comment +1