Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, April 19, 2014

Unacceptable Fate Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am unable to control
And respond to the natural call
It is fire inside against divisive forces
That is out to destroy the defense
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 April 2014

Agreed Yousuf Faroqi8 minutes ago I agree with you Mr.Mehta, we take what we have for granted. I think because we are so busy with our lives, we neglect the wrong that happens in our society. And yes, if this continues then it will be an unacceptable fate. Am I thinking alongside you? Or have I the wrong idea of the poem? Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 April 2014

Strong views on liberty and freedom Frank Duffey10 minutes ago takes a look at the system as a whole and has strong views about what is going on there Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 April 2014

Lovely Michelle Cappel13 minutes ago Lovely rich wording and imagery along with good flow and rhyme. some wording sounded a little awkward to me, but very excellent none the less. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 April 2014

nice Matthew Allen14 minutes ago very common today.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 April 2014

Re: Unacceptable fate (Score: 1) by LoveLifeLen on Monday, April 21,2014 (20: 47: 47) You have expressed yourself well. Very nice! Smile

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 April 2014

Scott Ransopher likes this. Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 5 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Suman Kumar Das 19 April 2014

Very thought provoking..............full of melody! ..............liked it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 April 2014

Like 5 minutes ago by Paula Victoria Puckett | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 April 2014

TS Brownstones powerful 4 minutes ago by TS Brownstones | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 April 2014

good one Ouranos Frey7 minutes ago well written, and understandable please check my poem *TRUE DARKNESS NEVER DIES* Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 April 2014

nice reign everlasting9 minutes ago I like your poems Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 April 2014

Nice idea Caleb Turner7 minutes ago Someone sees what's going on

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 April 2014

I am unable to control And respond to the natural call

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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