Wednesday, September 19, 2018

Unable To Think Comments

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I can't think
What shall I speak to you?
How to express my feelings?
I am yearning,
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 28 September 2018

Yes this is unimaginable people are indulging in destructive things that will ultimately bring us to peril but people are not learning hence to pray God to show the right path.......very inspiring indeed.......10++++++++

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Valsa George 24 September 2018

A slice of the painful truth! We keep wondering where this world is heading to! People seem to have lost their sense of direction. Greed, deceit and hypocrisy seem to have an upper hand and we are losing all our sacred ideals and values of life! Since we betray the Earth in which we live, the Earth also wreaks its vengeance on us! A thought provoking poem!

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 September 2018

Deception, violence and lie Wrath, , and greed Are flowing like water In a serpentine river of life. Give us buds of knowledge so that we my bloom in your garten as flowers of perfume.. thank u for your great thoughts which brings peace in the mind.. thank u for this prayer poem.. tony

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Mihaela Pirjol 21 September 2018

An ecological poem; a direct dialogue with the Source; a wondering at what humanity has become...this poem resonates truth; an appeal to awakening!

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 September 2018

I am yearning! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Indira Renganathan 20 September 2018

A heart felt prayer.....a plea to the Almighty to bestow a blessing and a boon to save nature...indeed a very essential prayer...thanks a lot 10++++ ....

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Man forgets to keep purity of mind and body Purity will help us enter His realms Please read my poems which demands such purity

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 September 2018

I can't express myself before You cause You are great Silent! I've nothing, none I'm though Your silence I seek You O'God. ///// nice writing

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 September 2018

A powerful and heartfelt prayer to God. A confession of the inadequacies and shortcomings committed by men and a wonderful promise to obey His laws. A very meaningful poem full of wisdom. Very well crafted.10+++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 19 September 2018

LAST night as I dreamt and gods hand held mine he said come son I am waiting but first finish all poetry so he gave me some more time thanks to him I can also read so many

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Ashika Murali Acharya 19 September 2018

Thought provoking write Sir.-Oh God! you have given us Human life to obey your law To preserve your nature But we are violating day by day, Is this the reason we are churning? Your question could be the answer to our miseries that we face year after year at different parts of the world. Thank for sharing..10+

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Gajanan Mishra 19 September 2018

deception, violence lies, everywhere, good write sir, namaskar

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