Saturday, November 28, 2009

Unable To Forget Comments

Rating: 5.0

You are still,
loved, and in my dreams,
susceptible to haze of dusts and smokes,
Converged to black holes,
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Sahar Sahar
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Afzal Shauq 15 August 2010

but i am like a disabled ambitions, Unable to forget you, Unable to get you. wow what a romantic philosophy here..your position in between gain and loss is really a question mark.. and you know a good question is always better the perfect answer..like your philosophical way of expression here in this poem..loved it..yeah quite impressive too

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Ejaz Khan 09 December 2009

A good poem here, Sahar, it got a great flow, keep it up!

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Dr.subhendu Kar 07 December 2009

susceptible to haze of dusts and smokes, Converged to black holes, Like a stray astroid, blown to sparks, .......................most passionate write, love seems to jingle by nature, yet ingeniously curved on te rune of dreams,10++++, thanks for sharing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 December 2009

can make you anoyed, with revengeful words, but i am like a disabled ambitions, Unable to forget you, Unable to get you.... I am love birdand long for your each kind gesure... iam unableto forget and thiswhere the poetess has made good difference... lovlyhpoem for allthe time i feelthatway....10 read mine not easy.... i miss

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good poem milady :) .

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Afzal Shauq 01 December 2009

but i am like a disabled ambitions, Unable to forget you, Unable to get you wow what a sweet poem and the idea you expressed here is couragious and inspiring alot. its really a prpfessionally written poem with impressive touches.. romantic abd very much poetic one..well done 10/10

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