These unabated dreams,
In the silent shores of sleep,
Where those glow worms
That emits perpetual light
...
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The intrusion of glow worms are always welcome... The moon is naughty, plays hide & seek, changes forms, yet gives a comforting feel. Let all those dreams come true & many more happy dreams rise in you.
A lovely read Kesav.. Imagery and flow perfect.. My admiration and 10 Wendy :)
a lovely amdience to meet the lover..with the moon to look over.. and the sun to wait under..see i become poetic when i comment on yours..lovely sir...10
Considering the fact that you come from a field alien to literature, the way you have woven this poetic fabric with romantic strands of thought, is no mean achievement! Carry on, Mr. Easwaran. My best wishes.
pictures how dreams take u to infinite pleasures yet reality strikes and dreams end in the dawn of life..yet keep dreaming and writing for your love...sweet poem..hope you read one favorite poem of mine 'the mourners'..thanks
Beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! You are a great poet! Karla Bardanza
Ask the moon shy half hiding She will tell those sweet tales For she has remained watching Us with hearty happy smile! Let these dreams never end Never end these buoyant nights Let the dawn and her light wait Until we say bye, my dear mate... - truly fantastic.. ;)
You can master dream like your poems. Terrific. A real sweet dream you possess & you are blessed with the power of sweet monotone.
A nice poem abt a love and the coziness shown in that relationship... Keep it up! ! !
I enjoyed reading this piece especially 'let these dreams never end', simply amazing and moving.
talking about dreams is interesting for me.. nice work..
Nice images; the best dreams are never long enough, are they?
Wonderful description of love my compliments, thanx for this poem
Wow.... I must say this is a complete poem... Well imagined, well penned and beautifully executed with masterful rhythm... Love, desires, triumph and then left-over craving for more... what else you want from a poet... Great read... Thanks for sharing...
the last two stanzas are stunning, , with fantastic flow, , very beautiful, , the expression ' half shy moon; ' is simply lovely, , a 10 plus from me
wow that's a nice poem, i love the code and the rhythm it has, i got imaginary when i was reading it which shows that it is really an Unabated dream.......nice poem you have there Kesav very nice.
Beautifully phrased poem of sweet unending dreams, it is bliss when the body is tired and the mind relaxed and nearly silent, to pass into that state of bliss, where all our dreams are sweet. Lovely poem Kesav. thank you. 10/10 Bob
I have read and admired with astonishment most of your poems and I can proudly say that I am your fan. This poem is sensual and very sharing and gives off its fragrance that is deepened by feel and desire. regards, mandara