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'And the sheets are ready for the next man who wishes to cuddle' that part threw me off... but just a wee-bit... the poem is really good... i like how you went from reminiscing.... then to realizing that he's not everything... great..+10

Wowow... this is good stuff.

this waz a good poem that i will remember 10+ good job

I felt this poem had strong words A new MAN gosh, gosh Lord help me please good write 10

wow I love how it is like past future and now present kind of poem very creative Tiffany 10+

I love the cronologicness of how your mood changes wonderful