Blue sky
Sun shining
A beautiful day
I was there at the beach
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Wow, you rock the emotion with this one. That last line stings.
yes, that face we put on for holidays, even if we can't even fool ourselves. Pain is the gift that keeps on giving, is it not? Christos Anesti!
I like the way you wrote this poem. Very strong. Thanks for your comments about my poems by the way. best wishes. Kristoffer
Beautiful and powerful verse. Christos Anesti! G.