Un Castillo En El Cielo Comments

Well it is so different as we used to write in Spanish but it is good. Keep writing.... :)

Una estructura tipo haiku múltiple en Español. Interesante planteamiento. Sigue trabajando! Saludos, Dragon Wizard

buen poema amigo poeta, me gustó mucho las imagenes que proyecta el poema keep at the good work

nice simple but with a lot of feeling :)

The Castle in the Sky...Un tragico castillo en el cielo, un lugar donde no quisiera encontrarme. El poema parece enmascarar la triste realida de la vida. El espejo refleja lo que quieres ver- en el trasfondo; quebrantado! An interesting write.

Hermosamente y exquisitamente escrito....10

me no compreheno.........................

genial! me encanta la poema

The powm is ok good i should say, but idid not get the tiltle with the poem itself

esta poema con escribir muy bien..gracias

Sorry Ahmad...I do not know Spanish either...as Eyan says an English version would be helpful

Briefly and concisely writing - you wrote the cool poem. I like it. Greetings. :) Maria Barbara Korynt

sorry I dont know spanish you should put the poem in english also thanks

Ahmad, it's impressive that you're multilingual, but do you realize that many of us are not?

Please forgive me I do not know the language........ Yet I understand these pertains to something related to mosquito from the comments. Kindly translate it to English so that I can share you the moments of happiness.

ESTA POEMA ES FUERTE!

Mosquito's are pesty in the summer - they bite

You live in a poetic world my friend, begotten we all are with your verses from all over the world. It´s allmost like being on a holliday to another country. You are truly blessed. By the way i´d be honored if you read and comment on the will of the heaven on page 2. Divine greetings from Friesland Boomfriend Ruerd

great one cool 10+

Hello friends, this is the English translation. 'Castle In The Sky' I woke up Not early I saw Mosquito Chewed Chin’s blood On wall Spider Go backward Mirror In front of Clinked I boiled Well’s water Chatered