Un-Break My Heart Comments

please bring back the light, What a fantastic idea.I enjoy the whole poem.

this is attractive, a nice combination of pain, desire, and sadness. nice words of art and well done.!

thank you very much. i wrote this poem at school when i had a bit of free time in my IT lesson. it was just a quick poem that i wrote of the top of my head.

Your words flow like a song, of pain with the hope for salvation! Good wrote, lots of feelings expressed in your words!