(un) Beaten Comments

Your tender words reveal a heart that unfolds a journey of love, both fragile and bold, weaving a bond that shines through pain and illuminates the soul's deepest lines.

Fragrance of Mother's love is exquisite. I tried to find out the truth of the fragrance but failed. As if the stream of the poem is sprouted directly from your heart.

Don’t you hear my silent songs My sorrows are your sorrows too My poems sing best of your pangs As a poet I am not beaten true. This is how a mother identifies herself with her offspring. Through unblemished unselfish love. Nice poem. Thank you for sharing.

Beautiful poem that begins in tears and ends in hope: 'My poems sing best of your pangs As a poet I am not beaten true' Truly a great write.

Cry is the silent song. Beautiful poem

No mother ever fails her son Even if it be in deeds seemingly undone For whats hidden in her heart will one day become The true song of glory every grown up, child will sing for mom..... (Yes, as a poet you are unbeaten...true! Well expressed and great poem)

Wonderful poetic lines expressing the feelings of a mother

Wow..Very beautifully expressed. Enjoyed each words or each moment i can tell....wonderful.

As a poet you are not beaten, but stand on the zenith of perfection! This is what I feel on reading this poem. The sobs of a mother and her concerns and anxieties about her son, the self reproach at the thought of not having fulfilled her duties, all these are so poignantly brought out! Great! !

Interesting and impressive poem, well worded

A beautiful poem. It reminds me W.B.Yeats's A Prayer for My Daughter.

This is a very lovely work which evokes perhaps extra sympathy in me as a single parent. I thank you for your kind comments on my own work. Sincere regards, Roy

This is actually a great deal more than just a poem. This is more like a drama played out on a stage. I wouldn't be a bit surprised if this could not become a formal dramatic play. There is certainly enough content here for that. I am very impressed. GW62

Ne're so precious be a Mothers bond to a Child be... A very impassioned, emotional Penning, Prasanna....Very well expressed, indeed'''''''''''FJR

This is one of the most touching lines I have read: Gone now, but not gone her lullaby’s warble BEAUTIFUL, Love duncan X

A mother's failures in rearing a child are emotionally described.At the same time, . her own limitations, justifications and trysts with environs of life are well-depicted, entwined with her pining for the love of her child! Good poem, Dr John Celes

It is a poem that all mom's will love

I really enjoyed each and every word that you have woven in this poem. It has so much of life in the verses... one wonders, where was the talent until now... you have put your heart on this one, for sure! Deservingly 10 here.

Once did tears stand like pearls In my eyes, tenderness beamed In my dreamy face(eyes) , a girl’s Mirage, as wife, I a failure deemed this makes me to write a savage... primitivity made in its own natural folk pet character.... in own real feel

A very heartfelt write.I could really relate to it. Thnx...TO