Wednesday, September 5, 2012

Umbrella Comments

Rating: 4.5

Pacing forward holding hands
They go along through the hills
And valleys and beautiful seas
As i stood there watching them
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Sunny Rose
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Indranil Bhaduri 19 September 2012

Excellent writing.... I loved the metaphors..

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Aung Si 06 September 2012

Good job! I appreciate your style of composing poem.I say Wow!

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Kelvin Owusu 06 September 2012

this is nicely written, and dont apologize for writing metaphors they not stupid, keep it up

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Sunny Rose 05 September 2012

Wow you guys are really encouraging me so thnk u

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Valerie Dohren 05 September 2012

A beautiful poem, love the metaphors here.

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Eindaray Kyaw 05 September 2012

you are excellent at creating poems which has both literal and metaphorical meanings!

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Sunny Rose 05 September 2012

I wanted to say Ok Sagar but the thing is i can't comment with less than 20 characters hahaha

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Sunny Rose 05 September 2012

Well thnk u very much

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 05 September 2012

Very good, so nice and fragrant. well done dear Sunny rose, (10 out of 10)

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