Pacing forward holding hands
They go along through the hills
And valleys and beautiful seas
As i stood there watching them
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this is nicely written, and dont apologize for writing metaphors they not stupid, keep it up
you are excellent at creating poems which has both literal and metaphorical meanings!
I wanted to say Ok Sagar but the thing is i can't comment with less than 20 characters hahaha
Very good, so nice and fragrant. well done dear Sunny rose, (10 out of 10)
Excellent writing.... I loved the metaphors..