Friday, October 2, 2015

Ululation Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ululation is heard at the time of cruel death,
Umpteen People ululate from heart depth.
Unbearable pain it is for everyone sure,
Unavoidable is death no one can cure.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 December 2016

picture of Rohan ******* xbeautifully done sir....TFS 2 Oct 2015 by Rohan ******* | Reply picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x....very nice and a great theme, also.....much inspiring...thank you for sharing ★ 2 Oct 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xvery nicely created 2 Oct 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of Salim R Javed xNicely written piece absolutely wonderful job 2 Oct 2015 by Salim R Javed | Reply picture of Jarid... xA great work of art I describe this piece. tsf. 2 Oct 2015 by Jarid... | Reply picture of Keith Labonte xReally really good work and I love the use of these words! Great poet! 2 Oct 2015 by Keith Labonte | Reply picture of Ramin Ara xInspiring dear Kumarmani.Thank you for sharing. 3 Oct 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply picture of Gary Lee xU have a a talent at these types of poems, which is using the same letter to start each line and still relate the lines with a them or themes...great job brotha 3 Oct 2015 by Gary Lee | Reply

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Akhtar Jawad 03 October 2015

Uptake we should have as man is truly mortal, Ululation we mustn’t have as soul is immortal. It's amazing..........................10

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Liza Sudina 03 October 2015

thank you for vocabulary - want to learn new words! soul is immortal! thank you for your always didactic poetry! love it!

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 02 October 2015

Verily, we shouldn't ululate as only the body perishes.

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Kelly Kurt 02 October 2015

I could never ululate. I think in fact that we don't mourn for the dead, but mourn for ourselves. They are in a better place and we have to live without them til it's our turn.

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Rajnish Manga 02 October 2015

While reading the poem, I enjoyed the music of Ultrasonic words to my heart's satisfaction. I forgot, for a while, that the poem is about Death- the Ultimate destination of life. Thanks for this great poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 October 2015

Unavoidable is death; because, immediately one is born, one is about to die. Nice work.

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Anil Kumar Panda 02 October 2015

A must read for all. Beautifully done. Loved the style and honesty.

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Sanjukta Nag 02 October 2015

Phenomenal work. the greatest philosophy of life and death is expressed here but the marvellous crafting of the poem took all the credits alone. you have done masters in alliteration! 10++

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M Asim Nehal 02 October 2015

Splendid, stunning, superb, summative, sublime and stupendous poem............My vocab ends here and your begins from here, Hats off, Sir.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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