Friday, December 7, 2007

Ultraviolent Comments

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Medieval maidens military,
as morning masks the stars,
stand like sad soldiers, stationary,
or the minions of Mars.
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Nancy Ames
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Fred Babbin 08 December 2007

Cute. But this kind of stuff is hard to do in a meaningful way. So I get lost in your alliteration, and I wouldn't try to copy it. It's too hard, and I do this for relaxation.

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Nancy Ames

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