Tuesday, December 22, 2009

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I never had an addiction to Mountain Dew,
I had an addiction to you.
Polite conversations, go by so fast.
My only goal: to make you laugh.
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Benjamin Feliciano
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Alison Cassidy 28 December 2009

This is rather delightful Benjamin. The sort of love poem that I'd love to find written about me, he he. Rest assured your lady friend will receive it - all words penned with love find their mark. Your final line is particularly engaging. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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James Mclain 22 December 2009

It is in double agreement with he below, i agree..iip

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Romeo Della Valle 22 December 2009

I once was there, that the reason I wrote the poem titled 'A LOVE'S ADDICTION'. that is life which must keep going on, Your piece, well penned, keep it up! great talent you got,10+++Love and Peace... 1

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Benjamin Feliciano

Benjamin Feliciano

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