Ultimate Exit. Poem by Nabakishore Dash

Ultimate Exit.

Rating: 5.0


After my brain is dead,
my dear ones,
never be sad.

Be usual as ever you are,
don't deprive the bees
of their flowers to put on
my cadaver
as I don't prefer.

Call for a doctor immediately
to detach my organs
to transplant in others
who need them urgently.

Deliver my body to the hospital,
as it is donated by affidavit,
in pen and paper,
for studies and medical research,
I view them vital and logical.

Efface funeral rites
that are conventional,
my dear children,
remain easy without caring
for the comments of others
as those are irrational,
have not obtained real approval.

Face your problems
with renewed vigour and interest,
forget me as I am heading
for the unknown destination
where many have gone before,
the universal truth ever.

Giving food and clothes
to the needy is far better than
inviting a priest.
His performances,
by pond and river side
should be ceased.

Hi friends, colleagues, co-workers,
forget and forgive
the caustic and cruel words uttered,
bury, in your backyard,
my angers and blunders.

I am neither a celebrity
nor a super star.
Neither uncommon
nor an achiever.

Just a common man
to be lost in oblivion,
need no admiration
request all to avoid
casting aspersions.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nabakishore Dash 20 May 2023

Pardon me if I am hurting your good intellect.

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Nabakishore Dash 20 May 2023

Why are deleting now.?

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A great poem that depicts kindness and humility. A pragmatic way to ultimate exit. Top Marks!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 August 2021

Be usual as you are....a sound advice! Great.

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Nabakishore Dash 20 May 2023

beyond my patience.Kindly pardon

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Nabakishore Dash 20 May 2023

denigration.I have yol

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Nabakishore Dash 20 May 2023

Please do not invite self cd

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Nabakishore Dash 20 May 2023

at all.You write that u pay respect to elders and this is hoe

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Nabakishore Dash 20 May 2023

I am an oldman of 72 years with 35 years experience and very very rural background.I can use abusive languages in any languages u can not tolerate at

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Nabakishore Dash 20 May 2023

Respected Dr.Swain, thanks and gratitude for your lofty comment.But one request. I never want to win any thing either now now and in future.Please stop commenting in filthy odiya language.It does not befit your high degree and my liking

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