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Wow! Splendid ‘come [a]live’ pic Must be Ten++ dr. sakti

vHeavens are mine All else will drain! ! quotable lines. nice. shan

aesthetic---there is beautiful blend of physical nd divine beauty of a woman that makes her ever so elusive and longed for

won't we all lose our sanity if dreams are denied to us?

I loved it all except the last line. Perhaps the draining of something has a meaning in the east, that is not understood in the west. This is not a great word , or one with impact. That is what one needs at the end. Were it not for this, I found this work to be a treasurable one. GW62

Great poem, i love the descriptions you use. Keep up the gift all the best J.L