Ukpana Ukpoko Gburu, Nti Chiri Ya Comments

well told story... and i'm afraid one that happens to us all! good poem!

make me wonder if u are from easten nigeria. fine use of expression... and the use of animal causing destractions. good imagination. shows a picture of old easten nigeria.

I definitely agree with Osman Gani in the sense this well penned and poignant poem is rich in imagery and fine texture! 10+++ Thanks for sharing and keep inspiring the World with your talented writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

David, this was different flavor you add in your poem (so far i've read) but it have nice view...it makes me smile and it really a good write :) _Unwritten Soul

great imagery..good write SG

A vivid tale! You've done a great job spinning this one. Beautiful writing, all I can do is wait for more.10/10.

Really a splendid poem. Beautiful imageries, narration from a observing eyeview of grasshopper and moreover very thought-provoking poem. Thanks for sharing. :)

the anxiety is present, the persona is worried..it made me imagine the next thing the would happen to him. Its a good read.

Reminds me of 'Death in Tehran'. Good poem.