Monday, January 29, 2018

Ugly Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh yes, you saw through my skin,
You did, you saw what no one did
And... awestruck you whispered
Belle, where were you hiding so long?
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Sanchita Julka
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Dr Antony Theodore 12 February 2018

I could feel my heart beats pacing, Army of butterflies unsettled in my stomach.......inner beauty, There was something so intense in that moment Everything so much in blood and sweat.. expectic something fantastically romantic... but u end with the satirical ugly word. yes appearance and romance........ is your theme........... liked your poem very much.. tony

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Sanchita Julka 12 February 2018

thankyou for appreciating.

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Jazib Kamalvi 04 February 2018

Very impressive write, Sagarika. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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