Sunday, February 1, 2009

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I faced the white duvet cover,
but couldn't see it in front of me.
Tears flooded my eyes,
but I couln't feel them.
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Tea Kawana
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Pooja Ladyluck 01 February 2009

sad and unfortunate.......but moving....well expressed.........thanx! ! !

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Hope Wallin 01 February 2009

Wow. What a strong poem. It really makes the reader feel. Great poem.

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