Saturday, September 3, 2005

Udders Comments

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Once upon a time a cow
who had a flaxen-coloured brow
sat in the barn when time had come
to milk all cows, she felt so numb
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Kelly Allen Vinal 03 September 2005

H, you got teats on the brain! Good poem

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Mary Nagy 03 September 2005

Boy, when you get something on your mind you sure do know how to 'roll with it'! Great for a smile......... Sincerely, Mary

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 03 September 2005

Splinters and cows and balls on fire! What a diverse day we're having...lol. I like the poem too.

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 03 September 2005

cute Herbert really cute!

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Herbert Nehrlich1 03 September 2005

Love it. Talk about forcing rhymes. This is clever, udders - others. Well done Andrew. H

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