Tuesday, May 26, 2015

Udasi Comments

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Aaj ki rat keyun udas hay chand,
Chandni khoi khoi lagti hay,
Yeh sitare hayn kisqadar khamosh,
Patte patte pe ek sukoot sa hay,
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Geetha Jayakumar 27 May 2015

Ab mujhey samajh mein ayi kyon hain aap Udass? Ek tum jo nahin to sab hayn udas. Bahuth pyari kavita hai aapki. Loved reading it.

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Mr. M Jamal 26 May 2015

Patte patte pe ek sukoot sa hay, In hawaon pe ek jumood sa hay, And the end one Rat dhalne ko hay na aaye tum, Ek tum jo nahin to sab hayn udas. Khubusrta nazm :)

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Khalid Saifullah 26 May 2015

A touching poem.........................10

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