Wednesday, September 3, 2008

U Still Think I Care? ? ! ! Comments

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You still think I care? ?
When I know I no longer do
You were a memory in the past
That took the pain and sorrow with it
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Rudy Hossam
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John Smith 17 January 2009

Beautifully written. I can relate to finding the conflict within yourself. You can't live with them, you can't live without them. Great peice of work.

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XxBrokenHeartedCupidxX ! ! 31 December 2008

let all that sadness and anger flow out of you.

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Rita Hawkins 31 December 2008

Let the anger and sadness flow out, that way you will be prepared for anything.

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Cain XXX 14 October 2008

angry, sad, awesome. a very accurate portrayal of rejection and love. this was awesome.

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Blue Eyes 14 September 2008

waw girl u r definately great writer..keep going

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Little Hatila ;) 07 September 2008

wow...it is really a sad piece...well done lovely girl and keep going....

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Rudy Hossam

Rudy Hossam

Maryland (U.S.A)
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