Wednesday, September 27, 2006

U R My First Love Comments

Rating: 1.5

i try to pick u
out of my mind

but
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moon light
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Ibrahim Hydarah 02 December 2006

dear moon light...you must just correct your writing..you used to write in short latters..like: u...cos...etc..the poetry does not except like this..please..don, t kill your greats motions in your poems by these things.

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