Tuesday, February 3, 2009

*** Twohearts Blanket *** Comments

Rating: 5.0

Drops of rain ripped an aching soul
through the morning cry of longing's call,
cuddled at the cold, red empty couch
mind is flowing at thy colliding thoughts!
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Catrina Heart 06 February 2009

nice metaphors used...fine imagery...lovely poem.....10+++

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Rey Sanidad 03 February 2009

Do you still feel the pain? Sweet poem, I'll try to read again. Kumusta, ingat palagi kaibigan...

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