Sunday, November 3, 2019

Two Young Lovers Comments

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This tale of mine, is old, but it is one
That's constantly renewed and rewritten.
Two young lovers sitting on a park bench;
Held hands in the yellow glow of moonlight.
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Michael Hopkins 04 November 2019

It's nice when that connection is made with another human being. Well expressed Dominic.

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Kingsley Egbukole 03 November 2019

Beautiful poem of true love. Please kindly check my poems HOPE and THE BEAUTY OF DEATH and leave your comments.

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Dominic Windram 06 November 2019

Thank you both for your comments. It was a pleasure to compose this particular poem.

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