Monday, May 14, 2018

Two Wrongs Won't Make A Right. Comments

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Hate can't breed love like lies wont breed truth.

take not an eye for an eye, nor a tooth for a tooth.
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Michael Kelsall
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Milos Jovanka 14 May 2018

A lovely work, its word to live by, though without desire, their is nothing to inspire for that which we yearn and raise to achieve. Still a good poem, worth a read.

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Steve Howard 14 May 2018

Well rhymed and inspirational Michael. Rhyme on :) inspire on

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Robert Murray Smith 14 May 2018

Being a poet means we do not head our poems with a cliche. And we definitely do not use cliches in our poems. Originality is what we should always strive for.

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 May 2018

take not an eye for an eye, nor a tooth for a tooth Be humble and not driven by, jealousy or desire..so much of love and wisdom....... thank u dear poet for ur poem that conveys a lot.........tony

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