Tuesday, October 20, 2020

Two Words Comments

Rating: 4.8

The World stops spinning,
The clocks stop ticking,
I no longer hear the rain,
Life is frozen, I'm no longer living.
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Huseyin Abudharr Ali Diakides
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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 October 2020

A splendid poem! Many congratulations! !

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Hannatu Adamu 30 October 2020

Cheerful. A nice change from all the melancholy around poetry these days!

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Khairul Ahsan 30 October 2020

'All sounds other than your voice Are simply forgotten, And I am yours with no other choice' - Seems you are stuck in a deep relationship with someone. 'I'm completely yours' - that sounds so good! Congratulations on your poem having been selected as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 October 2020

The World stops spinning, The clocks stop ticking, I no longer hear the rain, Life is frozen, I'm no longer living. liked your graphic very very much. i ust love it. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 October 2020

Always smile! ! Be glad with your soul! Coronavirus taking away so many! Make a perfect day with the truth. 🤗😄☺ Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 October 2020

JUST SMILES I LOVE DAILY How can I escape that smile, It draws me into your reality, Two words and I'm trapped, Two words that are like poetry. lovely beautiful poetry read my poetry DOE SHABAD AND MOMS SMILES QUICKLY POET BE U UNGLY

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 October 2020

How can I escape that smile, It draws me into your reality, Two words and I'm trapped, Two words that are like poetry. lovely beautiful poetry read my poetry DOE SHABAD AND MOMS SMILES QUICKLY POET BE U UNGLY

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 October 2020

The outside World's nothing more, Than a nightmare, Even if the whole World is in chaos, I can no longer care. .... Beautiful poem penned; without true love this life as if stagnation of flowing river, loving heart wants only this beautiful world thru beloved graceful feeling, let the two words come, congrats for being selected this as POD....5*********

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How can I escape that smile, It draws me into your reality, Two words and I'm trapped, Two words that are like poetry.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 October 2020

A well penned poem of the day. Truly impressive and lovely. Congrats on your featured amazing piece...5 stars*****

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